Cross Out [Pokemon X blind nuzlocke] page 1

EDIT: Fixed some typos here and there that were the result of me typing out the dialogue at like 3 AM, nothing major.

I was meant to work on and finish this maybe a week or two ago, but I got busy with other things (I even had my wisdom teeth pulled! o/), and the page was short because I didn't think that the next part would fit well onto the same update without it being way too long.

So Cross out is going to be, for the most part, just black and white, with colour sprinkled in at my discretion. Since I don't work with black and white a lot, I would greatly appreciate technical advise from anyone who has experience with it, since I am still pretty nooby.

I'd appreciate any comments you got!

Link to my run on the forums: s7.zetaboards.com/Nuzlocke_For…